Tuesday 13 August 2013

My Fairy Tale Writing

                          Fairy Tale
 Once upon a time Far Long ago there was a village with a beautiful Queen. She had  long blond hair and white pure skin she was having a baby, When the baby was born they called her Snow  White, They called her Snow White because her skin was white as clouds and sand and her hair was black as a black coat.The Queen died in birth and King Arthur looked after the princess.King Arthur watched as his daughter was growing he didn’t get to do what he wanted to do with her.So King Arthur seatoff and looked for a beautiful lady to marry.He found a beautiful lady and marrired her the next day.The new Queens name was Maria,she had orenge curl hair and her skin was white as a dove.One day Snow white got told that her farther died but the Queen put a neckalis on him and turned him into a beast.Snow white  forgot.One day Snow white went for a walk down to the village, when she finally got to the village it  looked cold and sad.There were familys with no food and homes when she walked into the village a mother told her daughter to ask Snow White to ask if she can can have some food.Snow white asked a lady what is wrong everybody was happy and sang everyday.Snow white said, ‘that mast have been years ago”.cried the lady.“Why don’t you have money” Snow white cried, The Lady said, “The queen has been taking our money and spending it on Balls and parties.Snow White ran back to the castle crying, when Snow white reached the castle she ran into her room slammed the door and locked it.When the queen was finish getting ready for the ball she went to the mirror and said, “Mirror Mirror on the wall who is coming to my ball” the mirror replied,” there is a princes coming to your ball and Snow White is too and she is going to wear a beautiful dress to .”The Queen screamed rage.”Why is she coming to my ball.”The mirror said,”You could just kill her.”Yes i could I can tell one of the knights to kill her and feed her to  the beast. So the Queen told one of her knights to kill snow white so off went the knight to find Snow White. Then the knight felt sorry for Snow White so he went to the meat store and grabbed a heart that was from a pig so he brought it and put poisonous sauce on it  then he took it back to the Queen ate it and she died because it was poison and the Prince and Snow White got married and had a baby and lived happily ever after.      
                       
                       

                     

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

This story is so amazing, it reminds a lot about mirror mirror.
I like how you used imaginative words.
Brilliant work Khorus keep the great work up!!!

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