My Narrative Story - Running Away

ORIENTATION:One beautiful sun rise there laid a 5 year old girl named Sally.She had blond short cute curly hair with little green eyes and snow looking skin.One morning Sally woke up really excited for her first day of school.Sally got into her uniform.socks and shoes.She ran downstairs with a ratatatat with her school shoes.She gobbled up her breakfast grabbed her lunch but before she walked out the door her Mum said,”Take the long way Sally not the shortcut ok”......”Yes Mum” Sally replied and she skipped out the door with clomp clomp clomp.

PROBLEM:On her way to school Sally ignored her Mum’s instruction so she took the shortcut instead.When she was walking she heard footsteps from behind her but she just ignored it and kept on walking but she called hear it coming close,”BOOM BOOM BOOM” and Sally ran with all her might but before she could go she felt a tug on her arm and a pull on her arm.Sally tried to get free but it was too late the person that was holding her throw her into a black van and put a pillowcase over her head and drove off.When the school rang Sally’s house her Mum picked up the phone and the school told Sally’s Mum that she is not at school and her Mum said,”But she lifted the house and she was walking to school that can't be impossible?”but then Sally’s Mum realised why Sally isn't at school.”Can I ring you back”said her Mum and hung up. Sally’s Mum rang her husband and said,”Sally has been kidnapped!” “What how do you know”Said her dad “Because when I talled Sally not to take the shortcut and take the long way she took the shortcut” “ring 111 and ask for the police and tell them to go to panmure bridge shortcut”.Well the police were looking for clues the black van drove past and the kidnapper as laugh with a mean toan in it and said Hahahaha they will never know that i was me hahahahah”.

SOLUTION:When the man pulled into his driveway he opened the door and dragged Sally into a basement and locked it up.But sally wasn’t the only one in there was other kids young kids,kids my age and little babies too.”Why are yous here for” “Because we got kidnapped” said the children”Where did yous get kidnapped” “We all got kidnapped at panmure bridge shortcut” “I got kidnapped there to” and then we all heard yelling a screaming coming from downstairs and then we all hurried over to the window and there was lots of police cars ambulance vans and TV news and cameras there to.Then all we heard was “CLEAR” we all shouted and a police man hit the door and saw all of the kids that had been kidnapped and including me and took us downstairs to the ambulance to get us all cleaned up and put on bandages on and put blankets on us and food too.When I heard”Sally”then her mum and dad came running towards them and gave her a huge kiss and a hug.