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Once in a village there lived a girl named Angelina. She was a stubborn girl who always did her own thing. She never listened to adults and was quite spoilt. But Angelina had lots of friends. One sunny day she was playing with her friends, they were playing golf. Angelina hit the ball really hard and it went into a grass area. Angelina didn’t know what to do and was about to step into it.
When she was about to go into the grass area a man stopped her from going into it and the man said “Don't step in here , if do you will get cursed for ever”. Angelina said “I don’t care if I get cursed.” Then Angelina stepped into the cursed area and got the golf ball and started dancing. The man said ,”You have now been cursed , you and your friends”. Angelina stopped dancing and said “What do you mean that my friends are cursed too?” The man replied “ Because you said you don’t care about the curse, so your friends are cursed too and because you started dancing on the grass so, HAHAHA!!!!!!. THATS WHAT YOU GET!”
On Monday morning Angelina thought of going for a swim. She put on her togs and ran to the beach. The water looked amazing! She jumped in the water feeling great. Suddenly she felt an awful pain on her leg. She looked down into the water and she saw a huge jellyfish! She had been stung by jellyfish!! When she had jumped into the sea, there were heaps of jellyfish below her and she didn’t see them at all .The only spot the jellyfish stung was on her leg. Angelina swam as fast as she could but she thought to herself that she would not make it to the sand. Suddenly she felt someone pull her out of the sea.
When Angelina went back to her friends she told them everything that had happened. The next day she went into the bathroom. Angelina screamed really loudly. The sting the jellyfish had given her was enormous!!
Angelina started to think the curse was real. She went back to the woods and found the man by the grass. She said ‘I’m really sorry for what I did”. The man replied ‘Thats ok but next time, listen to me. You must listen to adults”. “I sure will”, smiled Angelina.
The Girl That Got Cursed
Once in a village there lived a girl named Angelina. She was a stubborn girl who always did her own thing. She never listened to adults and was quite spoilt. But Angelina had lots of friends. One sunny day she was playing with her friends, they were playing golf. Angelina hit the ball really hard and it went into a grass area. Angelina didn’t know what to do and was about to step into it.
When she was about to go into the grass area a man stopped her from going into it and the man said “Don't step in here , if do you will get cursed for ever”. Angelina said “I don’t care if I get cursed.” Then Angelina stepped into the cursed area and got the golf ball and started dancing. The man said ,”You have now been cursed , you and your friends”. Angelina stopped dancing and said “What do you mean that my friends are cursed too?” The man replied “ Because you said you don’t care about the curse, so your friends are cursed too and because you started dancing on the grass so, HAHAHA!!!!!!. THATS WHAT YOU GET!”
On Monday morning Angelina thought of going for a swim. She put on her togs and ran to the beach. The water looked amazing! She jumped in the water feeling great. Suddenly she felt an awful pain on her leg. She looked down into the water and she saw a huge jellyfish! She had been stung by jellyfish!! When she had jumped into the sea, there were heaps of jellyfish below her and she didn’t see them at all .The only spot the jellyfish stung was on her leg. Angelina swam as fast as she could but she thought to herself that she would not make it to the sand. Suddenly she felt someone pull her out of the sea.
When Angelina went back to her friends she told them everything that had happened. The next day she went into the bathroom. Angelina screamed really loudly. The sting the jellyfish had given her was enormous!!
Angelina started to think the curse was real. She went back to the woods and found the man by the grass. She said ‘I’m really sorry for what I did”. The man replied ‘Thats ok but next time, listen to me. You must listen to adults”. “I sure will”, smiled Angelina.
2 comments:
I like your story khorus. I like your title to "The girl that got cursed" Well done. KEEP IT UP!
Hi Khorus,
I like your wonderful writing.
you have put in a lot of effort, keep up the good work.
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